Feedback - Miss Spencer

There has been some progress since I last gave you feedback, and the work is looking detailed with some thought about conventions and the effect on the audience. However there is still a way to go and your work is still at a top level 2.

• You need to post your prelim task analysis to go with your film.
• Please tackle the improvements I suggested earlier, and then reply to let me know what you have done so that I can assess the improvements.
• There is a real problem with the images you are uploading, I suspect they are not JPEG's - see me in lesson and I will show you how to resolve this problem.